Wednesday, October 18, 2017

World War 1990: The Final Storm

We're halfway done with the read-through and we couldn't be more pleased.

It's a big book, 85,000 words.

By comparison Operation Arctic Storm is only 60,000 words.

The text is tight. The scenes are meaty. The flow is good. The MS is clean.

We are seeing very little that must be added.

We are noticing that we were a bit wordy last year with lots of  'of course' and plenty of distracting asides. These are being smited with righteous fury.

We are really quite surprised at how well things are going.

We sense a trap.

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